senses--fail on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/senses--fail/art/WIP-Untitled-2-288279418senses--fail

Deviation Actions

senses--fail's avatar

WIP Untitled - 2

By
Published:
842 Views

Description

Still desperately needing feedback.... :blushes:
I think she's coming along rather well though, if I do say so myself. Which I do, obviously. :aww:
Heavy, heavy referencing from this lovely portrait [link] by the fantastic ~missinnocentblonde. :)

Edit: WOW. YOU GUYS ARE THE GREATEST. 3 awesome critiques on my crappy little WIP? :wow: Thank you so much, everyone. On the downside, I no longer have the opportunity to whine about not getting any feedback...but on the plus side, you guys are crazy awesome and helpful and fantastic!
Image size
3240x4320px 3.68 MB
© 2012 - 2024 senses--fail
Comments28
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Pi-Rex's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Well, it certainly isn't bad, since you seem to have put much work in this. What lacks however, is detail, particularly with the nose and ears (if it had any).

And, to add, you have a great perspective for bright colors, but there's no harm in adding a little gradient and texture in the hair and skin so as not to appear ripple-ish and cascaded, especially with the paint brush stokes. I've done the exact thing many times, so don't worry. And you might want to add a little gloss in the lips and eyes, if you want it to appear more realistic.

Also, nice work. Keep up the good work.

~Pi.